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Post by cynder on Dec 17, 2008 17:17:25 GMT -5
Weeping
Seeping
Crying
Bleeding
Dying
Shattering
Breaking
Mistaking.
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Post by mreditor on Dec 17, 2008 17:58:40 GMT -5
I wouldn't really consider this a poem, since it is just plain words, might I suggest you re-do it and maybe end each sentence with those words....
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Post by cynder on Dec 17, 2008 20:05:16 GMT -5
Ah. I was kind of low when I wrote this poem so that's why it's just words. I might redo it. If not I'll delete the thread.
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