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Post by Owl on Dec 15, 2008 15:58:29 GMT -5
Dear Daimon, I miss you, so much. It’s a shame you couldn’t come see me off. Texas isn’t so bad. Though the people here seem hostile. My first day of school was kind of weird, people stared at me a lot because I wasn’t as tan as them. Love, Stephanie Dear Stephanie, I miss you too. North Dakota isn’t the same without you. Erica wants to know more about your first day. Ricky got into a fight with Sophia and they broke up, now they won’t even talk to each other anymore. It seems as if all of our friends are fighting, you were like the peace keeper around town. Love Daimon. Dear Daimon, I made some friends . They seem like the only kind people around the school. The swim team is having tryouts Saturday. I’m thinking about joining! Collage is so expensive! I had to get a job at the local pawn shop just to buy this semesters text books. Miss you , Stephanie! Dear Stephanie, That’s great! You should join the swim team! You might be able to be the best like you were around here! About the books... didn’t you get a scholarship!? The school should be paying for all of you books! Love Daimon. This is my first romance story so i dont know if its good.
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Post by mreditor on Dec 17, 2008 16:37:11 GMT -5
Dear Daimon, I miss you, so much. It’s a shame you couldn’t come see me off. Texas isn’t so bad. Though the people here seem hostile. My first day of school was kind of weird, people stared at me a lot because I wasn’t as tan as them. Love, Stephanie Dear Stephanie, I miss you too. North Dakota isn’t the same without you. Erica wants to know more about your first day. Ricky got into a fight with Sophia and they broke up, now they won’t even talk to each other anymore. It seems as if all of our friends are fighting, you were like the peace keeper around town. Love Daimon. Dear Daimon, I made some friends . They seem like the only kind people around the school. The swim team is having tryouts Saturday. I’m thinking about joining! Collage is so expensive! I had to get a job at the local pawn shop just to buy this semesters text books. Miss you , Stephanie! Dear Stephanie, That’s great! You should join the swim team! You might be able to be the best like you were around here! About the books... didn’t you get a scholarship!? The school should be paying for all of you books! Love Daimon. This is my first romance story so i dont know if its good. Anymore is gramticlly incorrect in the sentence unless you change won't to don't. Collage, is spelled college....
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Post by Owl on Dec 17, 2008 16:38:14 GMT -5
what did you think of it..?
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Post by mreditor on Dec 17, 2008 16:44:49 GMT -5
I believe it is a great start and set-up for an amazing story, very interesting how you use the same two people writing back and forth with a new subject everytime.
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Post by goldy on Mar 28, 2009 23:26:24 GMT -5
That was nice! I like it, and I HATE romance.
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