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Post by wolfie on Mar 19, 2009 10:19:50 GMT -5
 Okay this is the first time I have actually put ANY of my 200 hundred something writings up online so enjoy XD |
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Post by wolfie on Mar 19, 2009 10:20:03 GMT -5
Characters:
Sendogai- A quiet teen who hates everyone around him. His tragic past still haunts him. When he enters into the Scythe Organization, he discovers he has a talent not seen for a near millenia. He earns the nickname 'Sendogai' or Deathscythe for this ability.
Rikkagai- An outspoken girl raised by other Scythe Masters. She is asked to show Sendo around the Kihakugakure. The two are also assigned to missions together.
Rubigai- A demon child who was saved by the first Hollow, Bokogai, leader of the Scythe Masters. Since then, she has not aged. She helps the Scythe Organization quite a bit. He is also assigned to help Sendo.
Hoshigai- Hoshigai or Hoshi is Sendo's teacher. He accompanies the group along ALL their mission, giving advice and helping when necessary. |
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Post by wolfie on Mar 19, 2009 10:21:03 GMT -5
Chapter 1 Part One- Sendo's Denial
“Sendo! Sendo, Get back here! NOW,” Hollow Kitsune yelled to the dark child. Sendo laughed, shaking his head. “No. You promised me that coming here would let me see my family again. I haven't seen them yet. And I haven't mastered these 'abilities' of mine either. So until you give me hard evidence, I am not staying here another minute in this rat hole,” he said, turning away. The Hollow sighed. Sendo's father had been the same way. Rising from her desk, Kitsune began walking after the child, her long hair flowing behind her. She had caught up to him in no time. The child had barely moved. Kitsune grabbed his shoulder, staring down into his eyes. “You want proof? Well then Come here. I am going to show you something that I've never shown anyone else before,” she said. Sendo looked up at her. “Fine,” he said bluntly. The Hollow smiled and turned away from him, heading to the door behind her desk. She stopped at her desk and opened up a drawer, pulling out a key. As she looked up, she smiled at him again. What the hell is with her and smiling, he asked himself.
When Sendo looked up, Kitsune was already unlocking the door. And how is she so fast, he continued. “Well? Are you coming,” she asked gently. |
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Post by wolfie on Mar 20, 2009 18:40:57 GMT -5
so anyone got an opinion?
should I even keep writing?
all criticism is welcome
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Post by wolfie on Mar 22, 2009 11:57:52 GMT -5
well PHOOOEEEY lmbo I guess maybe I should quit
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Post by wolfie on Mar 27, 2009 13:40:50 GMT -5
....yeah I think i should stop writing
lol
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Post by goldy on Mar 27, 2009 18:56:32 GMT -5
WOLFIE!!!!!! Write more!
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Post by wolfie on Mar 28, 2009 16:29:20 GMT -5
XD thanks!
I will you do too okays?!!!
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Post by goldy on Mar 28, 2009 16:57:19 GMT -5
YAY!
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Post by ۞Quaalude™۞ on Mar 28, 2009 18:09:27 GMT -5
Yea Scythe Masters Hollow XD thanks!  QC |
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Post by wolfie on Mar 29, 2009 14:06:57 GMT -5
XD wow...and I actually re-wrote it.....so yeah I have a few new twists..I am not done with the first chapter yet though..its only three pages  |
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QC
